Painting Rearview Mirror

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Eduardo Suré; Rearview Mirror, 2017; Watercolor

In this painting, the observer is the driver of a truck looking into a rearview mirror. There are three images: the ground and the top and bottom views of a Class A mirror.

If I painted something like this again, I would make some changes. I would blur the ground to add depth. I would add a high horizon line as I did in the sketch. I would make the bottom mirror convex. I would also use a color pallet that matches the mood of the story.

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Sketching Rearview Mirror

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Eduardo Suré; Sketch of a Rearview Mirror, 2017; Graphite

In this preliminary sketch for a painting, I wanted to study how to have three perspectives in one image. I will only transfer the contour lines to watercolor paper.

The sketch illustrates a driver looking in a rearview mirror at an approaching vehicle. I want the vehicle in the painting to appear ominous.

Painting Caliginous

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Eduardo Suré; Caliginous, 2017; Watercolor

This painting is very simple, but I actually tried to do a few things with it. I would judge its success based on the answers to the following questions.

  • Is the outstretched hand the first thing to catch the observer’s attention?
  • Does the observer feel like he or she is asked for something?
  • Does the observer’s gaze move from the outstretched hand to the void where the face should be?
  • Is the void where the face should be disturbing to the observer?
  • Do the complimentary colors contribute to whatever excitement the observer may feel?
  • Does the perspective help the observer feel like he or she is a part of the scene?

I always want to draw and paint something that looks good, but I’ve started focusing more on the reaction I want the viewer to have.

Sketching Caliginous

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Eduardo Suré; Sketch of Caliginous, 2017; Graphite

The image above was my third attempt to illustrate my next short story. I didn’t use my first sketch because a van I drew in the scene looked too wide. I didn’t use the second sketch because the foreshortening of the hand was incorrect. I think the hand in this third sketch works.

Painting Brian

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Eduardo Suré; Brian Throwing Rock, 2017; Watercolor

I painted Brian to illustrate Finding the Gray Living Jewel. I wanted to convey his pleasure about his newfound strength, but I don’t think I succeeded. His face is too serious. I don’t even remember how I messed up his right eye.

I was excited about creating this illustration. I thought I was going to enjoy drawing a muscular guy throwing a rock. I was going to make the action dramatic. Instead, I struggled through some sketches, got a little frustrated, and settled for this.

I think I was in too much of a hurry. I will try to slow down in the future. Perhaps taking a break from a project if I’m struggling will help me reset.

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Sketching Brian

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Eduardo Suré; Sketch of Brian Throwing Rock, 2017; Graphite

I sketched Brian for my next short story, Finding the Gray Living Jewel. He is a steelworker in his 20s and is standing in front of a pile of rocks. He is easily lifting a heavy stone above his head. His expression should convey surprise at how easily he can carry the stone, and his muscles should appear unusually large.

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Failing to Win: My Second Short Story Competition 

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Eduardo Suré; Mary at Meeting, 2017; Watercolor with Vanilla Filter

In July 2017, I submitted Mary’s Ten O’Clock as my entry for a second short story contest this year: the Sean O’Faolain Short Story Competition. I was not placed on the short list.

I can’t say I was surprised. I thought the story was funny, but not one that would win a competition. My family really liked it and suggested I enter, so I deferred to their opinion.

It was fun to enter, hope, and experience real life suspense. I plan to submit short stories to a few contests every year.

Painting Amanda

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Eduardo Suré; Amanda and Smell, 2017; Watercolor

This is the full painting of Amanda and Smell. I cropped the illustration for my short story, Finding the Purple Living Jewel. I took some notes after painting Amanda.

  • Color sketches save time and frustration. If I hadn’t done them, I would have used some wild colors.
  • Start with fresh paint when creating color. I tried to darken the paint I used for Kevin’s skin color and the paint turned gray. 
  • Wet-on-wet is great for shadows.
  • Until I understand where shadows fall, use a model.
  • Use very light pencil for the structural drawing. Even though I drew lightly, I still had trouble erasing the pencil marks.
  • Be patient and wait until the painting dries before erasing pencil marks. I ruined Amanda’s lips by erasing too soon.

The combination of painting a person looking up and conveying the act of smelling challenged me. I did not think it was going to work. In the end, I was satisfied by the result.

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Sketch of Amanda and Smell

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Eduardo Suré; Sketch of Amanda and Smell, 2017; Graphite
I sketched Amanda for a painting to illustrate my next short story, Finding the Purple Living Jewel. To find the right proportions for a face looking up, I found a model of a woman online. For her eyes, nose, and mouth; I tried to use the model’s dimensions. However, my sketch did not look right to me. So, I moved her features.

The first time I finished adding all of her features, there was something about her that did not seem right. So, I held her up to a mirror and was able to notice her face was very asymmetrical. I went back and matched the pairs of features the best I could.

My last challenge was to show her smelling something. I don’t know what smells look like. I imagined smells looking something like smoke and drew them accordingly.

Thank you for stopping by! I hope you’ll visit again to read the story and see the painting.

Lessons Learned: Painting Kevin in Trouble

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Eduardo Suré; Kevin in Trouble, 2017; Watercolor

I wanted to capture some notes about painting Kevin in Trouble. I hope reflecting on the project will help me become a better painter.

First, I used a sketch to create a structural drawing for the painting. I blogged about the sketch for this project in, Sketch of Kevin. I adjusted the position of the collar and the width of the left arm. I felt the figure was improved, but I’m still stretching my ability to draw in perspective. I need to remember to use lighter pencil marks because I’m finding it harder to erase them at the end when the painting is dry.

Second, I selected colors and painted flat areas. I tried this approach last week and liked the control it gave me. It allowed me to focus on having a good foundation to build upon. I chose warm colors to evoke a feeling of distress. I showed the colors to my wife, and she told me they reminded her of fall and were comforting. I should do thumbnail color sketches next time to find the right combination of colors.

After the watercolors dried, I added form. I moved the source of the light to the other side of the room. That wasn’t my original plan. My reason for moving it was that the best model I could find had the light coming from that side. It wasn’t the bravest move, but I’m not comfortable imagining lighting yet.

All in all, I was satisfied with the painting.